Marnie, thanks for commenting.
Bit too dark on my monitor (could be my monitor). Especially at the
bottom.
On my calibrated monitor, its black along the RH side of the bottom edge &
along the RH side of the upper edge.
To me the real attraction in this scene was the golden light & the proximity
of the swans. Compositionally is does suffer as you mentioned.
Kenneth Waller
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Subject: Re: PESO - On Golden Pond
In a message dated 11/28/2005 3:51:35 PM Pacific Standard Time,
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Check out
http://mypeoplepc.com/members/kwaller/offwallphoto/id2.html
All comments solicited
Yeah, nay, and/or otherwise
What would you do differently?
Thanks in advance
Kenneth Waller
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Nice. But it doesn't quite work for me. And I think that is the first shot
of
yours I have ever said that about.
Bit too dark on my monitor (could be my monitor). Especially at the
bottom.
Somehow the placing of the swans/geese? seems a bit off. Too much empty
space
on the left? It just doesn't seem to hang together compositionally as well
as
most of your stuff does.
Could just be me. I do, however, love the light. Great. Makes them much
more
interesting.
Marnie aka Doe
