I should probably keep my mouth shut since, for the most part, I seem to be
way out of step with the rest of those who've commented on this photo. 
But, being a fool and having just taken some pain medication, I'm gonna
jump right in.

I don't like it the way it is.  

First, there's a shiny spot on the tip of her nose - two actually.  IMO,
they should be brought down some.  Her cheek below her left eye is a bit
hot.  That, too, might benefit from being toned down somewhat.

The photo appears overly sharp and, IMO, could benefit from a little softer
look.  The sharp detail of her pores does little to enhance or add to what
could be a very fine image.  The wisps of hair that are over her left eye
appear overly sharpened.  There seems to be some halos around a few
strands.  

Just curious, Bill, what sharpening technique did you use?

Well, there y'have it.  

Shel 
"You meet the nicest people with a Pentax" 



> On 12/9/05, William Robb wrote:

> > http://users.accesscomm.ca/wrobb/pictures/portraits/IMGP0146.html


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