Very nice. I miss a final "pow" somwhee. I stike of light somewhere - on the flowers - on the violin, not on the edge of the table. Remember that the human eye will start lokking where the light is bright - in this pictures it would be the left hand side table edge. Try to use som effect light, where it really makes a difference. The angle is not perfect - the cut off table legs does nothing for me. Rase the camera satnd point a litle and show us the round table in the bottom of the frame - perhaps a mirro effect in the shining surface ogf the table?
Those were just my two cents. Regards Jens Bladt http://www.jensbladt.dk -----Oprindelig meddelelse----- Fra: Collin R Brendemuehl [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] Sendt: 9. december 2005 00:38 Til: [email protected] Emne: Did it right this time -- Comments please http://www.brendemuehl.net/images/IMGP1403800.jpg http://www.brendemuehl.net/images/IMGP1400800.jpg These are un-retouched images *ist DS FA50/1.4 1/60 @ f5.6 2 - Sunpak 611 @ about 25 degrees off either side, full power, 1 through umbrella, one through softbox.
