Hello David,

I've looked at this a couple of times now.  My feelings are mixed
about it.  What I like:
Unusual natural phenomenon
Unusual water color
Composition

What bothers me:
Just doesn't appear sharp - the walls look very detailed, but soft and
the stream rocks likewise - perhaps just need sharpening
Even though you worked hard on the hole, it still is pretty dark -
Velvia was probably a wrong choice here

-- 
Best regards,
Bruce


Monday, December 12, 2005, 1:44:32 AM, you wrote:

DM> It's about time I posted another pic...  I have several versions of
DM> this one; this is just the first I came to when scanning.  The others
DM> are on the next row which I'll process at a future date :)

DM> I've put in a fair bit of work trying to maintain some detail inside
DM> the big hole... you may need to be in a darkened room to get the most
DM> out of this pic.

DM> http://www.bluemoon.net.nz/photo/printsdb/view.php?p=154&t=1

DM> There are still a couple of minor faults to my eye but I'd rather put
DM> the effort into the medium format version which is a much better pic
DM> (and will be scanned at a later date).

DM> - Dave

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