On 1/3/06, [EMAIL PROTECTED] <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> I am not getting out and taking pictures these days -- difficult to. So I've
> been going through some old photos.
>
> This was taken back in May '05 when I shot a bunch of old gas pumps. At that
> time I was told the one I showed on list was too soft. Upset me because that's
> what my former photography teacher kept telling me. I changed lenses (one
> shot too soft), then cameras systems, and improved my technique, so I thought 
> I
> was way past the too soft stuff. Anyway, that's why I got upset. Raw nerve.
>
> This is the first photo I've shown with PS post processing. I am learning PS
> CS. Before it was all Elements post processing. All I did though was use auto
> stuff and USM.
>
> I plan to shoot them again. But I also have bunches of gas pump photos that I
> may work up into a collage too. They are really more striking when taken
> together.
>
> I think this one's mildly interesting, but nothing great. I've considered a
> closer crop on some of the flakiness and/or gear stuff. Suggestions on that
> welcome.
>
> Its interest is more in its age. This was the oldest gas pump they had. Dated
> back to the 1920's -- 1928 I think. Maybe a tad earlier.
>
> http://members.aol.com/eactivist/PAWS/pages/oldgas.htm
>
> Comments are okay. Just don't tell me it's too soft.

Well, I've made snarky remarks about it, so I suppose I should comment properly.

As a stand-alone photo, it's nice enough, but doesn't really say much
to me, especially given the fact that, absent a title, I'd have no
idea what it is, other than some ancient mechanical contrivance.

I think it would look great as a series of old pumps, where it could
be seen in the context of other, similar machines.  It would also look
great as part of a series of a number of other shots of ~that
particular~ pump, too.

cheers,
frank

--
"Sharpness is a bourgeois concept."  -Henri Cartier-Bresson

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