I like this one. I think the crop is exactly right. I might rotate it one degree clockwise. But that might just be me. Good work.
Paul
On Jan 21, 2006, at 10:19 PM, Igor Roshchin wrote:

Sat, 21 Jan 2006 16:23:55 -0800
frank theriault wrote:

Nothing Big or Important, just a slice of street life, I guess.  I'm
not sure how I feel about this one.  Sometimes I like it, others I
don't, so your comments will be especially useful to me.

http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=4048050&size=lg



Frank,

I also think that the composition is not working here.
IMHO, the picture doesn't have any point for an eye to stop on.

I took liberty to play with possible crops:
(sorry, I did a very crude crop, just to demonstrate the idea,
i.e. I didn't look for details too much)
http://www.komkon.org/~str/Frank-PAW/

The first two would still fit to the subject,
while the rest are completely different. :-)
(and the resolution is limited, - sorry, that's based on what
was available on your page.)

Igor



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