Dan, the things that jump out at me are - image centered,tilted horizon along with the intersection of the horizon with the boat.
A silhouette of the boat w/o the sun might be a stronger image.
I think this scene is one that has to be worked, I hope this isn't you only image of the scene.

Kenneth Waller

----- Original Message ----- From: "Daniel J. Matyola" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
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Sent: Thursday, March 02, 2006 12:17 PM
Subject: PESO: Sunset Sail


This is a snap that I grabbed last week in Key West, FL, at thenightly "sunset celebration" at Mallory Square. I was just trying tocapture the feeling of the event.
http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=4178034
Comments, suggestions, and especially constructive criticism are welcome.
Dan M


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