Tim, just commenting on the composition -
I'd show about half of the sky you're showing over the bird & about half of the space to the right of the bird (this would help keep you eye on the subject bird). I like the tilt to the post the bird is on & it's good you have no merge of the bird with the horizon (again this help keeps the eye focused on the bird).
All in all I'd say not a bad starter.

Kenneth 'Waller

----- Original Message ----- From: "Tim Øsleby" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>

Subject: PESO: Fisrt attempt at birds


My first attempt in my eco political photodoc "Fuglefjæra på Nordfjordeid".
While waiting at my "new" long zoom, I am using my Vivitar 70-210 S1 plus
AF1.7x. Not the best combo for this, but I got to start somewhere. I have a
lot of practising ahead of me before I am a bird photographer.
http://foto.no/cgi-bin/bildegalleri/vis_bilde.cgi?id=225879&brukerid=35178&n
omenus=
400 ISO, tripod, f:6,5, 1/640, cropped to portrait format.

I really need some feedback on this to get me going. This image is not meant
as documentation on the specie, more a getting the "mood" picture.


Tim
Mostly harmless (just plain Norwegian)

Never underestimate the power of stupidity in large crowds
(Very freely after Arthur C. Clarke, or some other clever guy)





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