Tim,
Thank you for the comments on my picture. I think I agree with you that I
am not happy with the centering of the pine ball. I will try again.
sandy
http://www.fotocommunity.com/pc/pc/mypics/698154
From: Tim Øsleby <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
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To: <[email protected]>
Subject: PUG comments, part 1
Date: Sat, 11 Mar 2006 19:20:54 +0100
First: I have been many posts behind for some time. Now I am looking at an
empty in-box. A wonderful feeling.
May I ask for a moment of list silence to let me celebrate the event? ;-)
Another way of celebrating is to comment the pugs. My favourites and almost
favourites are:
" I que es la veritat? " by Lucas Rijnders. At first glanse this did say
much. When I notice the line that stands out, it changes. A pleasant image.
" MBD " by Patrick Rendulic. I guess there are some message here. Sorry,
it
does not reach me.
" Ripples " by Henk Terhell. Really like this one. The perspective is
perfect. Myself may have ruined this using a wide angle, you didn't. My
only
nit is about the top. There are some ripples that just starts, that annoyes
me a bit. Cropping of tiny bit would have improved it.
" Field " by Jens Bladt. This is one of your best shots Jens. Simple and
well done.
" Dew " by Dag Thrane. The idea is good, but something is missing.
Something about the composition makes it fall apart.
" Metal Landscape " by Gianfranco Irlanda. Interesting approach on a daily
life item. Well executed.
" Gords " by Bob Sullivan. Well seen. A funny picture. I'm not convinced
about the framing. Something tells me you had other options that would have
given a better composition.
" Green Light " by Francis. Interesting use of colours. Good light.
" Pine Ball " by Sandy Hermann. Well seen. Like the background. I'm not to
happy with the centred composition.
" Anti Pattern " by Boris Liberman. I like the title.
" Webs " by Catherine Wilson. Good idea. I wish it was sharper.
" Marshal St, Scottsdale, Az " by Ann Sanfedele. One more time Ann show us
a very good eye for lines. The moon (or whatever it is) makes this little
extra.
Think I'll stop here, I feel a bit negative. More to come, I hope.
Tim
