The composition is so-so.  Maybe standing more to the front of the church
and eliminating some or all of the extraneous elements on the LH side of
the pic might help, although the addition of the street does add some to
the story, giving the church and sign more of a sense of place.  The
substantial crop, and the significant degradation of the picture quality,
hurts this image more than the questionable crop.

Of course, I never liked HP5+ and never cared too much for HC110 either, so
my personal dislikes are showing.

Shel



> [Original Message]
> From: Scott Loveless 

> Taken with the Spotmatic shortly after getting it back in working
> order.  Heavily cropped.  I would be interested to hear your
> criticisms of the composition.  HP5+, HC-110.
>
> http://twosixteen.com/gallery/index.php?id=286
>
> Thanks for looking!


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