On Apr 21, 2006, at 7:34 AM, Boris Liberman wrote:
http://not.contaxg.com/document.php?id=13178
I like this photo a lot, but it needs some work.
- The tilt in a square frame was the first thing I noticed and it's
distracting.
- The hair on the woman in the foreground needs to be burned in to a
deeper tone, as should be some overbright bits on the table. The hair
especially, however.
- Some of the business at the top of the frame seems distracting. I'd
experiment with cropping
The skin tones and expression of the woman in red are excellent,
however. You caught a very real moment in time with the shot.
Godfrey
