WH> I had to make a trip to visit my mom who is 83 soon. This
Japanese style
WH> lantern had been in her garden for years and seems to be
weathering time
WH> just as good as mom.
WH> http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v699/newtmaker/
GardenLanternsm.jpg
The composition seems a little staid ... a little too conservative
somehow... and the top of the lamp begins to blend into the
background. Beyond that, the rendering has a bit too much
contrast ... the shadow in the important detail in the lamp is too
dark, the mushrooms and other details on the tree stump are too hot.
If you captured RAW, I'd go back and pull down the contrast then in
your image editor work on expressing the tonalities and highlighting
the subject a little better.
Godfrey
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