In a message dated 6/7/2006 3:11:03 PM Pacific Daylight Time, [EMAIL PROTECTED] writes: The new version is at the same page http://www.photosight.org/photo.php?photoid=37679&ref=author Below the picture you will find a thumb "Versjon 2" that's the one
Tim ======== I prefer the first version, with the blown out windows, rather than having any details in the windows. Better symbolism. Also the lighting in other areas is more dramatic. The one thing I am unsure about is the two kids at the bottom of the pic. I didn't really notice them in the first version. But I do in the second and their postures are eloquent. However, I like the strong light beam on the bench next to the right most boy, another symbol. Maybe you could just bring up details in the shadows a little in the lower area, without affecting the light beam? (You'll have to use a selection tool.) In other words, I think your first instincts were fine. Marnie aka Doe :-) -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
