Hello Roman,

On the first shot - there is a white blob just to the side of her head
that is very distracting.  The smoothness of the background in general
is nice and she does have a very nice smile.  It would have been good
to step to the right just a bit to remove that blob.

The second shot doesn't work as well for me.  I don't like the pole
coming up behind her and going through her head and I don't find her
expression particularly appealing.

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Best regards,
Bruce


Thursday, July 6, 2006, 8:10:52 AM, you wrote:

R> A day at a street market. I'll skip the comments, would love to get ones
R> from you. Just hit these [related] links on each page to see entire set
R> of faces and spaces.

R> http://roman.blakout.net/?blog=20060706140926

R> Thank you.
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