In a message dated 7/5/2006 11:57:18 AM Pacific Daylight Time, [EMAIL PROTECTED] writes: I know you have worked on stuff like this before. This is pretty good. It gives a sense of who she might be. It causes me to look at things that could be associated with her and her thoughts.
With it all, I find that I am wanting to have something more in this portrait. Perhaps some sense of her being there - a shadow that I could identify as her or something. Perhaps a hand or shoulder or something. I think that would strengthen this even more. I hope you understand what I am trying to say. -- Best regards, Bruce ========= Agree. I also find the lamp too dead center -- the shot too symmetrical to hold my interest. A lamp, a photo, and some books don't tell me much about her either. Only a little. I'd like more personal clutter -- like shells if she likes them, some jewelry, if she likes some, a shoe, something. Something that had more intimate contact with her body somehow. Almost with the impression of her fingers on something. Along the lines of what Bruce said. Just my .02. Which you probably won't like. Marnie aka Doe :-) -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
