Tom, I like the subject & the attempt but it doesn't grab me. Can't quite put my finger on it. Orientation, composition?
Kenneth Waller ----- Original Message ----- From: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Subject: Re: PESO - Water Warp > In a message dated 7/14/2006 2:25:57 PM Pacific Daylight Time, > [EMAIL PROTECTED] writes: > http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=4682145 > > > Tom C. > ======== > Cool. Basically I like it, but I think the composition isn't quite what it > could be. Those silvery sections end up being long sections that sort of > run out > of the frame too much. i.e. the eye goes out of the frame too much -- > doesn't > return enough. > > This would have worked better as a vertical, Tom, in my humble opinion. If > you try it again you might try it that way and see what you think. > > Marnie aka Doe > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
