Thanks, Paul.  I like the left bank, too.  See my reply to Bruce.

Thanks, again!

On 7/19/06, [EMAIL PROTECTED] <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> I like this. Peaceful and pleasant. I wouldn't crop out the left bank. It 
> establishes that this is a river, rather than just the shore of a lake or 
> pond. I would burn in the sky on the left side of frame, and I would crop a 
> little off the top as Bruce suggested below.
> Paul
>  -------------- Original message ----------------------
> From: Bruce Dayton <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
> > Hello Scott,
> >
> > I mostly like it.  The issues can be most dealt with in a crop.  I
> > find the left bank to be of no value to the picture, and the left side
> > of the sky kind of hazes out.  So I would crop the left side off.
> > Also the sky is not really very strong and doesn't need that much
> > showing.  So I would crop some off the top.  I tried it here and feel
> > the picture is much stronger that way.
> >
> > I like the angle and colors that you have portrayed here - a little
> > more work on the image and it could be quite good.
> >
> > --
> > Bruce
> >
> >
> > Wednesday, July 19, 2006, 9:42:19 AM, you wrote:
> >
> > SL> 
> > http://picasaweb.google.com/sdloveless/July2006/photo#4953492787365543954
> >
> > SL> Taken from a bridge near Jersey Shore, PA.  PZ-1, 28-80 power zoom,
> > SL> Fuji Superia 800.  This is one of my first few photos with a
> > SL> polarizer.  All comments and critiques are greatly appreciated.
> >
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