Hello everybody,
As usual, I'm late with the comments but, you know, it's summer
time...
" The Blue Hour " by Rodger Whitlock
You said that, it's not a great photograph.
Even with the obvious limits due to the situation (the camera on
the roof of a car) I must say that there is a great fault in the
image: it is, how can I say, without subject. There is nothing
that draws the attention, nothing that is the "centre" of the
image. Too many things in the frame that are unimportant...
Try to leave out more from the frame next time.
" Players " by Collin Brendemuehl
Interesting the role played by the two candles. It's nice that
you chose not to follow a geometrical composition too still.
I don't know if it's my monitor, but the image looks too grainy.
Did you expose it @100 or more? I think that the impact could
improve if you printed (or at least showed) darker, leaving the
dark part in a nice black background.
" Roue de Paris " by Dan Matyola
Nice shot. I find the roofs in the lower part a bit distracting.
I know that you stated you wanted the reflections on the car
roofs to be part of the image, but I think you could have done
better with a wide angle in this regard. Maybe a bit of cropping
could improve the image.
Gianfranco
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