In addition to the grad ND used on the sky, I severely darkened the
foreground dead grass and cropped it by about half. I didn't like it's
'in your face' glare at the time.
Dodged the barn front a bit.
As I look at the image, a fix eludes me. Very often when this happens,
I ask myself why I didn't do the obvious. In this case, that's not
happening.
Thank you, Marnie.

Remarks always appreciated.

Jack



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> Lovely barn, lovely tree. Sort of agree with Bob about branch right
> at peak 
> of roof. But what bothers me more is the lighting, bright, bright.
> Might tone 
> down contrast in PS or redo in later afternoon light. Definitely
> worth a 
> revisit, good subject matter, and older barns in California are
> increasingly harder 
> to find. Has lots of potential, texture et all, but I find the
> brightness 
> distracting. HTH. 
> 
> Marnie
> ==========
> 
> > Jack,
> > Film!  Wow!
> > Nice setting, but I want to get the oak's branch out of the barn's
> > roof peak and I have some trouble visually separating the right
> side
> > of the tree trunk from the background.  Obviously, you have more
> > framings of this setting?
> > Regards,  Bob S.
> > 
> > On 8/12/06, Jack Davis <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> > > Wife and I took a Sierra foot hill drive earlier this AM and
> found
> > a
> > > road (Frenchtown) we hadn't taken before.
> > > Came across this barn framed by a beautiful Oak and set off by a
> > patch
> > > of California Gold dry grass.
> > > Had a 1-hour processing and CD done at Walgreen's.
> > > Scan only able as web upload.
> > >
> > > MZ-S, FA*28~70, 1-stop B+W ND grad(sky), Reala 100, Bogen 3021
> > w/Bogen
> > > Proball
> > >
> > > Comments welcomed
> > >
> > > Jack
> > >
> > > http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=169
> 
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