P. J. Alling wrote:
>I decided to re-visit a few more PESOs that people have suggested >changes to, in the past few months. The most recent come first. in this >group. > >The first a few suggested would look better if part of the subjects out >of focus hair was cropped out so I decided on a square crop. > >Before: >http://www.mindspring.com/~morephotos/PESO_--_rose.html >After: >*http://tinyurl.com/yhqnyk > Looks better to me by a lot - but then I'm the one who suggested the crop :) > >Next a full frame capture of a Beach Rose taken last summer, it was >mentioned that it would look better with softer lighting, well I >couldn't do that but I was able to soften it a bit in photo shop, >(cropped it to 4:5 aspect ratio as well). > >Before: >http://www.mindspring.com/~megazip/PESO_--_beachrose.html >After: >http://www.mindspring.com/~morephotos/PESO_--_beachroseii.html > Well I like this one much better too > >Finally one I haven't really reworked so much as re-photographed. It >was suggested that I take the time to shoot these abandoned Gas Pumps >the way I'd do a portrait session. I've been back a number of times to >do just that. Some may remember the original, (I can't find it right >now). I decided I like this view a bit better. > >http://www.mindspring.com/~morephotos/PESO_--_pumpsii.html > >As usual comments are welcome but may be totally ignored. > I like the geometry, the subject matter, but the light is wrong for this kind of shot... makes it a bit too busy, too much going on. Keep going back :) ann >* > > > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
