Hi Paul ...

This is a pretty picture ... and a pretty humdrum picture.  Often
breaking the rule of thirds can contribute to something pretty
interesting, but running the horizon right through the middle of this
scene reduces any interest here.  The left side shows considerable
light fall off, and while I believe that's the result of how the light
fell naturally, it does nothing to help the photograph.  I know you
can do better.  Using a 24mm lens allows one to play more with
perspective.  Perhaps if there were something of interest in the
foreground you'd have something with more eye appeal and impact.  I
know you can produce better work than this.

Paul Jones wrote:
 
> Here is my picture of the week. 
> As usual comments are welcomed.> 
> http://www.alphalink.net.au/~nrg/week7.html

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Shel Belinkoff
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