Thanks, Mark, You hit it exactly. My featured element was the mouth or opening of the creamer. I tried lower, but the shadow began to narrow so moved back up. I've printed the Shadow somewhat lighter and like it either way. It is too tight on the lower left, but when I checked the slide, I verified the the scanner had gotten it all. The framing just got away from me.
Thanks for your thoughts! Jack --- Mark Cassino <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > I like it. I agree with Marne that the creamer is pushing too close > to > the bottom of the frame, but I like the basic sense of form, light, > and > shadow here. > > I'm tempted to say "get lower" wrt the creamer, but I'm not sure. I > once > shot a couple hundred ceramic pots as a favor for a ceramics > instructor > to document the final projects from his class. My first instinct was > to > get low on the subject, but then you lose the shape and form of the > opening of the piece. So maybe a little lower and little bit back... > but > nice shot. > > - MCC > > Jack Davis wrote: > > Sorting through some secondary slide storage, I came across this > and > > found that I still consider some of its shapes pleasing. > > Guess it doesn't matter where you find them. > > > > Jack > > > > Comments welcome! > > > > http://photolightimages.com/aspupload/detail.asp?ID=217 > > > > > > > > > > > > > ____________________________________________________________________________________ > > No need to miss a message. Get email on-the-go > > with Yahoo! Mail for Mobile. Get started. > > http://mobile.yahoo.com/mail > > > > > -- > - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - > Mark Cassino Photography > Kalamazoo, Michigan > www.markcassino.com > - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > ____________________________________________________________________________________ Looking for earth-friendly autos? Browse Top Cars by "Green Rating" at Yahoo! Autos' Green Center. http://autos.yahoo.com/green_center/ -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
