This one is much better IMO.  I rather like it now.

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Best regards,
Bruce


Saturday, February 17, 2007, 10:47:10 PM, you wrote:

GD> Thanks for all the comments ... I did some localized adjustments to
GD> the tonal curves on faces and details, added a little blur to the
GD> upper portion of the background, etc. Can't do much about the  
GD> cropping as that's about all I could get in given all the foliage and
GD> other junk that surrounded everything in this little 'zoo'. And with
GD> an ultrawide lens too... !

GD> If you have the moment, please take another look. :-)

GD> http://homepage.mac.com/ramarren/photo/PAW7/07.htm

GD> Godfrey

GD> ---
>> Well composed,  but the busy background detracts. Of course that's
>> what was there, but, nevertheless, it brings it down a notch IMO.
GD> ---
>> I like this one a lot but would be happier if you could try to  
>> lighten just
>> the faces a bit.
GD> ---
>> I was going to say it looks like a good silloette, but i'd probably
>> mis spell it, so i won't
GD> ---
>> The subject is today's winner of the "Stranger Than
>> Fiction" award.
>>
>> The photo needs more detail in the figures.  Not that
>> I know how to get it there; the only statue of Charles
>> Dickens in North America is a block away, and while
>> very nice to look at, its dark bronze has been
>> impossible to photograph well.
GD> ---
>> How do I join this band?? ;-)
>>
>> I would prefer a bit more space to the left - the most distant  
>> 'musician' needs more room in front of him.
GD> ---
>> Cool photo Godfrey!  Yes, I'd prefer a touch more
>> space all around I think... but of course I don't know
>> what you cropped out.
GD> ---
>> Lovely wide angle feel; 21mm really is plenty if one has an eye.
>> I'd like more detail in the drummer's face, though.






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