It's a nice scene and a good composition, but it lacks tonal separation. Try working on the conversion. You might be able to do a lot more with it. How does the color version look? That's another possibility. Paul On Feb 24, 2007, at 12:13 PM, P. J. Alling wrote:
> As I said in my Rick Wormer, I know it's busy. But I risked life and > limb to get this shot and I was damned well going to post it. I'll > tell > a little more of the story, (I didn't want to before because I didn't > want to seem to be whining). While clambering down the 90° slope, > (well > a little exaggeration there, more like 80-85° slope), I slipped on a > patch of ice and thought I'd be swimming, well at least wading, in icy > water for sure. However the monopod I was carrying got jammed > behind a > rock and stopped me from slide/falling to the bottom by punching me in > the ribs, hard, they still hurt more than a week later. Yep, I was > going to show this shot somewhere. > > [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: >> In a message dated 2/22/2007 12:12:49 A.M. Pacific Standard Time, >> [EMAIL PROTECTED] writes: >> >>> Forgot the important part: >>> http://www.photo.net/photodb/photo?photo_id=5628202&size=lg >>> >> My missing URL: >> >> http://www.mindspring.com/~morephotos/PESO_--_milldam.html >> >> P. J. Alling wrote: >> >>> One more B&W conversion. >>> >>> An abandoned water mill dam on a tributary to the Connecticut >>> river. >>> >>> Equipment: Pentax *ist-Ds/smc Pentax FA 20-35mm f4.0 [AL]. >>> >>> As usual comments are welcome but may be totally ignored. >>> >> >> =========== >> This has potential. But is a little busy for me. Not sure what I >> would do to >> improve it, though. >> >> Marnie aka Doe >> >> <BR><BR><BR>**************************************<BR> AOL now >> offers free >> email to everyone. Find out more about what's free from AOL at >> http://www.aol.com. >> >> > > > -- > Entropy Seminar: The results of a five yeer studee ntu the sekend > lw uf thurmodynamiks aand itz inevibl fxt hon shewb rt nslpn raq liot. > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
