Marnie, as long as you may rework this, the thought of removing a bit of the foreground grass might be fine, but, IMO, the sky feels as though it's smothering the trees and needs opened slightly. Did you ever guess that this image would generate such an outpouring of "artistic" advice. I'm sure it has something to do with your warm "accepting" manner.:)
Jack --- [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: > In a message dated 3/4/2007 8:14:58 A.M. Pacific Standard Time, > [EMAIL PROTECTED] writes: > Only just seen this. I prefer the b&w version. In the colour version > the greens are too dominant, and distract from the horizontality (?) > of the composition, which is what makes the photo in my opinion. > > If you have a tabbed browser you can load each version in a separate > tab, and switch between them to see how much of a difference the > green > makes. > > I would prefer to lose even more of the foreground, just up to the > base of the curve of lighter green, to emphasise the horizontal even > more strongly. > > I think it's a very good shot anyway. > > -- > Bob > > ========= > Thanks, Bob. :-) > > I've decided, if I print it, it needs more work anyway. > > Marnie aka Doe > > <BR><BR><BR>**************************************<BR> AOL now offers > free > email to everyone. Find out more about what's free from AOL at > http://www.aol.com. > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > __________________________________________________ Do You Yahoo!? Tired of spam? Yahoo! Mail has the best spam protection around http://mail.yahoo.com -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
