Hi, Marnie, All I feel when I look at this is a bit of pathos. I want to see the pile of tires and how I could make them more dominant (foreground) and in the frame with the near tires sign. As the lighting allowed, maybe a low angle vertical shot from a the building next to the tires.(?)
Jack --- [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: > In a message dated 3/20/2007 10:22:32 P.M. Pacific Daylight Time, > [EMAIL PROTECTED] writes: > It is well executed and probably more interesting than I would have > done, but still doesn't really grab me. > > -- > Bruce > =========== > Bruce, honestly, I am not sure it really grabs me either. Looking at > it now > I think there are ways I could have shot it to grab me more. But > that's > debatable. I will probably head back to Napa again sometime in the > next few months > and I can try it again and see. It occurs to me with this kind of > structure > and most low building shots the use of negative space is essential. > But that > is just a thought kicking around in my head. > > So thanks for the input. > > Marnie aka Doe :-) > > > > Tuesday, March 20, 2007, 6:11:58 PM, you wrote: > > Eac> Someone told me a few weeks ago that I make too many > disclaimers about > my > Eac> pictures when I post. So I am going to try not to. But it's > hard. Like > this > Eac> one, I... (mumble, mumble, mumble). > > Eac> Another one from Napa. Shel spotted this, not sure I would > have. But > it was > Eac> a nice piece of Americana. > > Eac> Not the usual kind of thing I shoot, so I am wondering if > people will > like > Eac> how I captured it or not. > > Eac> http://members.aol.com/eactivist/PAWS/pages/tires.htm > > Eac> Comments welcome. > > Eac> Marnie aka Doe > > > > > ************************************** AOL now offers free email to > everyone. > Find out more about what's free from AOL at http://www.aol.com. > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > ____________________________________________________________________________________ Expecting? Get great news right away with email Auto-Check. Try the Yahoo! Mail Beta. http://advision.webevents.yahoo.com/mailbeta/newmail_tools.html -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
