Jack Davis wrote:

>Hi, Marnie,
>All I feel when I look at this is a bit of pathos. I want to see the
>pile of tires and how I could make them more dominant (foreground) and
>in the frame with the near tires sign.
>As the lighting allowed, maybe a low angle vertical shot from a the
>building next to the tires.(?)
>
>Jack
>
jack, you are kidding , right?  tell me you are just cracking wise...

the geometry and lighting are what matter.  The structure is much more 
interesting than
a pile of tires.  I think her angle of view is perfect.  And the irony 
of the dominant word on the
sign and the very few tires is also amusing.  I wish I had taken it.

ann

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>>In a message dated 3/20/2007 10:22:32 P.M.  Pacific Daylight Time, 
>>[EMAIL PROTECTED] writes:
>>It is well executed  and probably more interesting than I would have
>>done, but still doesn't  really grab me.
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>>-- 
>>Bruce
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>>Bruce, honestly, I am not  sure it really grabs me either. Looking at
>>it now 
>>I think there are ways I could  have shot it to grab me more. But
>>that's 
>>debatable. I will probably head back to  Napa again sometime in the
>>next few months 
>>and I can try it again and see. It  occurs to me with this kind of
>>structure 
>>and most low building shots the use of  negative space is essential.
>>But that 
>>is just a thought kicking around in my  head.
>>
>>So thanks for the input.
>>
>>Marnie aka Doe  :-)
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>>Tuesday, March 20, 2007, 6:11:58 PM, you  wrote:
>>
>>Eac> Someone told me a few weeks ago that I make too  many 
>>disclaimers about 
>>my
>>Eac> pictures when I post. So I am going to try not  to. But  it's
>>hard. Like 
>>this
>>Eac> one, I... (mumble, mumble,  mumble).
>>
>>Eac> Another one from  Napa. Shel spotted this, not sure  I would
>>have. But 
>>it was
>>Eac> a nice piece of   Americana.
>>
>>Eac> Not the usual kind of thing I shoot, so I am wondering  if 
>>people will 
>>like
>>Eac> how I captured it or   not.
>>
>>Eac>  http://members.aol.com/eactivist/PAWS/pages/tires.htm
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>>Eac>  Comments  welcome.
>>
>>Eac> Marnie aka Doe   
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