I think it's a good idea, but not quite there yet. Worth pursuing though. It reminds me somewhat of a photo by Steichen of a bunch of roses which are blown. This attempt has fallen between two stools, I think. There is too much of the bunch below the flowers, or not enough of the bunch, depending on which way you take it. I would try filling the frame with the flowers, perhaps losing those sprays on the right, or pulling right back and showing the whole thing.
http://tinyurl.com/2v4d6c http://www.photogravure.com/collection/searchResults.php?page=1&artist =Steichen,%20Edward&view=small&individual=277 -- Bob > -----Original Message----- > From: [EMAIL PROTECTED] [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] On > Behalf Of Collin R Brendemuehl > Sent: 22 March 2007 01:23 > To: [email protected] > Subject: Your opinion is ... > > > (Apart from the mediocre scan ... ) > http://www.brendemuehl.net/images/bwflowers.jpg > > > > Sincerely, > > Collin Brendemuehl > http://www.brendemuehl.net > http://evangelicalperspective.blogspot.com > http://philosophyforchristians.blogspot.com > > "He is no fool who gives what he cannot keep to gain what he > cannot lose" > -- Jim Elliott > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net > > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
