Just went back to it. The colors and tones are lovely. The composition is very interesting ... you are highlighting the no-space and tracery of guy lines and reflections. What was bugging me before was the right side ... too much of the boats was drawing my eye away from all the delicate tracery of lines and reflection.
I tried cropping it further to almost a square, mostly from the right edge, and rotated it just a tiny amount counter clockwise. That settled into what I felt was a nicer composition. Worth giving it a try, see whether that makes a difference to you. G On Mar 23, 2007, at 10:51 AM, Boris Liberman wrote: > I really wonder what your second look brought you, Godfrey ;-). > > Boris > > > Godfrey DiGiorgi wrote: >> On Mar 20, 2007, at 12:31 PM, Boris Liberman wrote: >>> http://not.contaxg.com/document.php?id=17092&full=1 >> >> I think I see what you're driving at with this one, but I'll have to >> come back to it again when my eyes are more rested. It's a >> surprisingly complicated photo. >> >> Interesting... -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
