In a message dated 3/31/2007 6:19:18 A.M.  Pacific Daylight Time, 
[EMAIL PROTECTED] writes:
Hi!

Three fourths  down the way from our town to Beer Sheva (capital of Negev 
desert region of  Israel) there is this little nature reserve, called Pura.

Here is a  gallery of shots I made today. I should mention that 77 Lim is 
mighty  flexible lens to use. Some of the shots were made using the 
monopod of  course.

http://boris.isra-shop.com/pura_2007/index.html

Have your  brutal and honest say.

Boris

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Okay, honest, I think you  can do better. While it's not a bad gallery, it is 
not a great gallery. For one  thing, you were shooting at the wrong time of 
day, too mid day, shadows are too  deep and contrasty. Nature shots work best 
in morning or late day. It looks like  a pretty area. I have walked on Mt. 
Diablo fairly often where I live and I have  lot of photos that look like this. 
(I 
do like the bottle on the cracked earth).  So, *if these were my photos*, I 
would look at them and think I often had not  simplified enough -- that I had 
often not dug deep enough and figured out  exactly what I liked about a 
particular spot or area. Hard to explain what I  mean, Boris, but nature is 
pretty so 
just shooting it can produce some pretty  shots. But pow or really good or 
great landscape/nature photography has more.  Some sort of graphic or 
compositional element that stands out. I recommend a  look at John Shaw's work 
(he has a 
good site on the web). Or Harald Rust's in  the PUG. :-)

I know what I aspire to, myself, landscape-wise, and I  rarely achieve it. 
It's not easy.

Hope that helps and is not too brutal.  I guess I am saying, try again; you 
are getting there.

Marnie aka Doe :-)   




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