A crop & a catch light ? Much improved IMO.
Kenneth Waller ----- Original Message ----- From: "Bruce Dayton" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Subject: Re: PESO - A bird in the Bush > Thanks to all who have commented on this shot. There have been > several suggestions on crops that might improve the shot without > taking away from the original intent. Here is a crop based on those > suggestions: > http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/bkd_4644a.htm > > Original: > http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/bkd_4644.htm > > > Again, I think this improves the shot. It is nice to have this list > to provide comments and ideas on how to improve one's photography. > I'm glad that I am a member. > > -- > Best regards, > Bruce > > > Saturday, March 31, 2007, 5:33:14 PM, you wrote: > > KW> The perch & surrounds do add alot for this image, but I'd probably > still > KW> crop out some of the background (half the distance from the bird to > top edge > KW> & maybe the same to both the R & L edges). > KW> A catch light in the eye would really make this a great catch. > > KW> Kenneth Waller > > KW> ----- Original Message ----- > KW> From: "Bruce Dayton" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> > > KW> Subject: PESO - A bird in the Bush > > >>> This is the full frame shot. I rather like it in context and how it >>> turned out rather than a hefty crop to show just the bird. What I >>> like is how the bushes he is perched on are in the plane of focus and >>> the background really blurs out. >>> >>> Pentax K10D, Sigma 100-300/4 EX @ 300mm, Handheld >>> ISO 400, 1/180 sec @ f/8 >>> >>> http://www.daytonphoto.com/PAW/bkd_4644.htm >>> >>> -- >>> Bruce > > > > > > -- > PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List > [email protected] > http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
