In a message dated 5/1/2007 4:04:08 P.M. Pacific  Daylight Time, 
[EMAIL PROTECTED] writes:
Hi Marnie

I like where  your project is heading.  Some excellent work so far.

This one  doesn't quite work compositionally for me.  I wonder if a 
horizontal format  would have worked better.  I just had a bit of a play with 
it and 
prefer a  horizontal crop with the lower edge being almost at the top of that 
centre  telegraph pole.  This makes the tree a bit more prominent without  
detracting from the "human impact on the environment" theme.

Just a point  of  view.....


Cheers

Brian


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Horizontally,  there was more to each side. Another tree (further away), more 
high voltage  stuff and more telephone poles. However, the crop I showed is 
the second crop  (two different pictures) that I tried. A shorter shot may be 
in order. Maybe I  will got back to working on the first one.

Thanks for the  feedback.

Marnie aka Doe  :-)

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