Marnie, the railroad is almost right in the middle of the frame. It is not good in this case. It seems to cut the picture into two. Probably if you could find a different spot, it would not be that distracting.
Boris [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: > I have felt the need to do something different. So I am taking a photography > class, advanced, from a teacher I took classes from about four years ago. > Yup, that teacher, for those of you that remember, that depressed me because > I > thought he was overly critical of my work. However, this time around he > seems > to be a more complimentary, so maybe I have improved. :-) Well, it has been > four years. > > We are supposed to do a "project" and the class culminates in a little show. > It's hard to explain my project, but it's sort of the intersection between > man-made and nature in my area. Or ecological landscapes, or environmental > landscapes, such as landscapes in context just like environmental portraits > are > portraits in context. In other words, not everything will be pretty, pretty > and I am not cloning telephone poles, etc. out. > > But I am still going for good composition and somewhat good looking over > all. > > http://members.aol.com/eactivist/PAWS/pages/wetlands1.htm > > For those of you familiar with my area, that is Mt. Diablo and part of the > moth-balled fleet (still there, but much smaller than before). > > Comments welcome. > > Marnie aka Doe :-) > --------------------------------------------- > Warning: I am now filtering my email, so you may be censored. > > > > > ************************************** See what's free at http://www.aol.com. > -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
