Personally, I like #1 better. To my eye this shot is less well balances - too much of both the boats and the wetlands. On #1 my eye isn't fulfilled by either, so it moves around and explores the tension between between the human made boat and the natural wetland. That reinforces the conceptual premise behind the shot. Here - I want to spend time on one or the other, so the tension is diminished.
I hope that makes sense - MCC [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote: > Sorry, I was going to hold off on more PESOs until next week. Because I've > felt that taken up a lot of bandwidth this week. But... > > The teacher liked most of my shots. Except he felt some had flat light and > should be reshot. I am not so thrilled about that, as I don't like to slow > down and revisit when I am on a roll. However, one I might. > > The wetlands one he wanted more wetlands, although liking the composition. > > Bruce wanted more mothballed fleet. > > This was shot the same time as the other one. It may actually be better than > Wet Lands #1, although I liked #1's simplicity. Note that you can see the > same ducks on an island in the middle. > > So I am now curious, Bruce, do you like this one better? > > http://members.aol.com/eactivist/PAWS/pages/wetlands2.htm > > Comments welcome. > > Marnie aka Doe :-) > > --------------------------------------------- > Warning: I am now filtering my email, so you may be censored. > > > > > ************************************** See what's free at http://www.aol.com. > -- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Mark Cassino Photography Kalamazoo, Michigan www.markcassino.com - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
