Doug Brewer wrote: > Scott Loveless wrote: > > >>> Take a look at it and tell me what the subject is. >>> >>> >> It's a car. Not sure I'm following you. >> >> >> > > Well, is the subject the headlight? > > If so, then you need to be closer (crop...) to make the composition > support that subject. > > Is it the lines of the car? Then, again, the composition doesn't support > that. There are too many things competing for the eye that it can't > settle anywhere. > > Is it the overall look? Then the lighting needs to be evened/adjusted to > give equal value and get rid of the dead spot behind the tire, and there > is not enough of the tire, and etc. > > I'd like to see what else you did with the car. > > OK. You and Bob nailed me. I'll put up a half-dozen or so later today.
-- Scott Loveless www.twosixteen.com -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net
