Interesting shot.  This is where I would see some possible
improvement:
1) the silhouette could be a little blacker and sharper
2) the upper sky is just too much of nothing - try cropping a bunch
off and making it more of a pano look
3) too centered - try cropping so the left side lower wire hits the
corner and the right side wires are evenly split by the corner.  That
along with some top crop would hold more interest.  Basically a little
more room on the left in the direction the bird is looking.

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Bruce


Monday, July 16, 2007, 2:12:25 PM, you wrote:

d> Hi all...
d> Just screwed my Tair 3S lens from a Zenit Photosniper onto my ist-dl and
d> snapped this, hope you like...

d> http://farm2.static.flickr.com/1027/831268962_bc2c962154_b.jpg


d> Drew.




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