An  improvement would be a less distinct background.

Kenneth Waller
http://tinyurl.com/272u2f

----- Original Message ----- 
From: "Bruce Dayton" <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>
Subject: Re: PESO: Monhegen Flowers


> This is close to being really nice.  I think the issue for me is that
> there are enough flowers to perhaps look for some order or pattern,
> but I couldn't find it - just seemed a little jumbled.  There are not
> quite enough flowers to make it look like a field.
> 
> I hope I am making sense - just a few less flowers and perhaps a
> better angle to present them so my eyes don't wander all over.
> 
> -- 
> Bruce
> 
> 
> Sunday, August 12, 2007, 2:43:07 PM, you wrote:
> 
> JG> Here is the first of a series I photographed the past few days.   
> JG> Comments are solicited but may be ignored......Well....maybe
> 
> JG> http://www.flickr.com/photos/jhg2/
> 
> JG> John G.


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