Nice exposure & subject matter, but there's too much in the image. My eyes wander trying to focus on something but I'm pulled away to another feature.
Isolate & simplify. Kenneth Waller http://tinyurl.com/272u2f ----- Original Message ----- From: <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> Subject: PESO - Time & Wind > In my last photography class we went up to Half Moon Bay. Already showed > some other shots from there. > > But we first stopped at Pebble Beach (Half Moon's Pebble Beach). Lots of > water and wind and time worn rock. Very interesting. Almost too > interesting. > > I never really liked any of the shots I got there. Because it was sooooo > interesting, I found it hard to isolate any area of particular interest. > Too > much to choose from. :-) And I couldn't figure out how close to get in, > later > how close to crop, and also whether to take more long distant shots too. > > Here's one that is okay (I have a lot of this kind of thing though and > not > sure it's any better than the others). > > It's actually time, wind, and water, but I wanted a shorter title. > > http://members.aol.com/eactivist/PAWS/pages/timewind.htm > > Comments welcome. > > Marnie aka Doe :-) -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
