Mark, while, as I stated earlier, I like the image fine as is, I'll add
that the upper left rock has a minor brown tone that is more noticeable
to me than its brightness. There is some brighter glare on the lower
rock surfaces.

Jack
--- Mark Roberts <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

> Tom C wrote:
> >> Godfrey DiGiorgi
> >> 
> >> On Nov 9, 2007, at 12:52 PM, Mark Roberts wrote:
> >> 
> >> > http://www.robertstech.com/temp/67-1.jpg
> >> 
> >> Very nice, Mark. All the elements play together well. My only
> >> criticism is that the upper left corner seems brighter than I'd
> like,
> >> it draws my eye up and away from the central point of interest.
> >> 
> >I agree basically about that area.  It's not the brightness that
> bother 
> me,
> >but that there is so very little of that element, the tree trunks,
> that 
> it
> >distracts instead of being complementary.  Not sure how to make it 
> better or
> >if a crop would help or not.
> >
> >Just a minor observation. 
> 
> You're both right - that upper corner bothered me from the beginning.
> 
> I've burned it in a bit and cropped the image slightly, which I think
> 
> has helped. (I've updated the image a couple of times since I put it
> on 
> line. I'm not sure which you've seen - if it was the latest then you 
> won't see any change at all from when you first looked at it: If you 
> find you can't see the changes I just mentioned that's why!)
> 
> I think I can get a good image out of it with a little work.
> 
> 
> 
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