I agree with its compositional significance, but it would not be a
minor distraction if the camera had been a smidgen higher. Maybe if you
were a tad taller...?  (BG)

There, I've critiqued your critique critique. ;)

Jack
--- frank theriault <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:

> On Dec 18, 2007 12:53 PM, Jack Davis <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote:
> > Really nice conversion! Crisp attractive image!
> > Although it is a somewhat minor distraction, what must be a snow
> plow
> > drift, obscuring the lower portion of the service bay area, causes
> it
> > to feel 'incomplete'.
> >
> 
> Up here we call them "snowbanks", and they're so ubiquitous over the
> winter months, that the scene would be incomplete without it.
> Besides, to my mind, that long horizontal strip is a nice
> compositional piece.
> 
> Not that I wish to critique your critique...
> 
> ;-)
> 
> cheers,
> frank
> 
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