Boris Liberman wrote:

>Hi!
>
>I haven't been posting anything but a very few PESOs as of several 
>months. Finally, I seem to have hmmm been coming out of my photographic 
>slow down.
>
>...(snip)
>
>http://boris.isra-shop.com/crops_2008/index.html
>
>Have your brutal and honest say.
>
>Boris
>
>  
>
Boris - I started with clicking on the most recent post in my mail box 
which was Godder's comment on
this one

http://boris.isra-shop.com/crops_2008/content/IGP08267_large.html

That is the 4th - readinga cross and then down on the index file)
I pretty much concur that it is the "best" whatever that means :)

and I like one of the closeups as well -  the 6th one (1st in second 
row) and the vertical closeup
which is the 12th....
6 is here
http://boris.isra-shop.com/crops_2008/content/IGP08270_large.html

12 is here
http://boris.isra-shop.com/crops_2008/content/IGP08357_large.html

The 14th works as it is, although it isnt'a s interseting to me 
personally as the others I mentioned.

13 needs a bit of a crop (ohoh, pun alert!)  and 15 - well the light is 
great but the background is too busy
some cropping here .

I think those could tell the whole story...

here is the problem for most of them - the out of focus but not blurred 
out enough backgrounds on most
and the very washed out rim of sky beyond .

I'd prune this collection to 5 or 6 and then I think it would tell the 
story with a greater impact.

Well - ya said to be brutal, my dear! :)

ann  








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