Well, I'd crop it just a little tighter, but not too much, and if possible less DOF, maybe blur the background, yea, I know that's cheating... I think I'd work a little bit more on that conversion too. There's just too much gray and I'm sure it would look better if there was more detail in the girl's(?) hair and maybe a bit more detail in the bleachers and the whites should be whiter..
Bruce Walker wrote: > I caught what I think has the makings of a street photo. But my inner > critic says, "too much clutter--isolate subject more (somehow)", or > "it's too tilted", or any number of other issues. I've already done a > minor crop and I've played with the b&w conversion until I'm going > cross-eyed. > > So I could use some advice: what would you do next with this? If you > think, "erase it", then please say so. :-) > > http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3072/2582652248_fc7511edd5_o.jpg > > Thanks! > > -bmw > > -- Vote for Cthulhu. Why settle for a lesser evil... -- Dr. Jerry Pournelle -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
