Cropped is better, but now the 'ridge'across the top is distracting - it needs togo also.

Kenneth Waller
http://www.tinyurl.com/272u2f

----- Original Message ----- From: <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: PESO - Afternoon Walk


In a message dated 1/31/2009 11:55:31 A.M. Pacific Standard Time,
[email protected] writes:
<[email protected]> wrote:

 http://www.mapphotography.com/PAWS/pages/afterwalk.htm

 Comments  welcome.

I do like the relaxed atmosphere and the lines  are nice. Ever considered
cropping a little more at the bottom?

Ralf R. Radermacher


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In  a message dated 1/31/2009 12:21:54 P.M. Pacific Standard Time,
[email protected]  writes:

It's nice, I'd be inclined to crop it so the person's feet  were
practically in the lower left corner, although one with the dogs  nose
in the lower right corner could also be  interesting.
=================
There's a reason I cropped it the way I did  (there usually is).

The landscape starts changing above his head. This is  in a big area of
mainly dry grass (in summer) with some Oak trees. But above his  head is
mini-canyon (sort of where two foothills meet) and a section of green weeds/grass.

So here's a different crop with him more down and to the  left, but still
copping off as much extraneous stuff as  possible.

http://www.mapphotography.com/PAWS/pages/afterwalk2.htm

But  I think the first is a stronger  image.

http://www.mapphotography.com/PAWS/pages/afterwalk.htm

Whatdayathink?

Marnie  aka Doe :-)


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