[...] > > I plan on having a collage type gif with a "catch phrase" probably > written underneast the gif. > > I'm looking at these so far.: > > "Focused on rural Ontario" > "Focusing on images of rural Ontario." > "Focusing on rural Ontario" > > What say they. Any one of these appeal to you all.?? > > Dave
Say them out loud to yourself a few times and decide which sounds best. The middle one is terrible - too many syllables, and why would you be focusing on the images? The 3rd is the best, but to be honest I think it's all a bit of a cliche. X in focus. Focusing on X. Feels a bit lazy to me; isn't it the first thing that's going to come into the head of every photographer whoever wanted to put their pictures of X on the internet? This whole thing of taglines is rather tired and dreary. How many more white vans do I have to see with the words "Delivering solutions" written on them before I go postal? I blame Amazon. Why not just tell it like it is, without being cutesy? "Photographs of rural Ontario" sounds perfectly reasonable to me. Cheers, Bob Dumping on other people's lawns -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
