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From: "Nick Wright" <[email protected]>
To: <[email protected]>
Sent: Friday, April 17, 2009 5:54 PM
Subject: PESO: Epiphany
I was drawn to the architecture, trees and general light of this scene.
http://is.gd/t2Zw
But I'm not sure I'm happy with the way it came out.
Comments, suggestions?
A few thoughts...
Generally, out of focus foreground objects are distracting. You've included
one in the top right corner. I think I would have moved forwards a bit to
see if I could have either gotten rid of it completely, or at least gotten
it situated in such a way that it could be cloned out easily.
For myself, I'd like to see the building sitting lower in the frame, so I'd
have pointed the camera up a bit and corrected the verticals in post.
The sky is kind of a funky colour, not much you can do about that at the
time of the picture taking, but it could be adjusted with curves, I suspect.
It might also make a very nice B&W, although that won't fix what I'm seeing
as compositional flaws.
It could also use a couple of monks....
William Robb
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