On Thu, Apr 23, 2009 at 10:30 AM, Jack Davis <[email protected]> wrote: > > Fresh spring morning and a "pretty nice" catch, Paul. Like it! > I have an idea how you regard such grabs, but I do have a minuscule nit. Her > cap is the slightest bit too near the top of the frame. As is often true, it > gives the feeling of cutting off the scene at that point. Especially if you > don't look directly at it.
ACK! Now you've gone and done it. ;-) You're right, of course, she needs more "air" above her head. Can't do anything about it, though, as I'm showing it full frame. Now I keep looking at it feeling claustrophobic - she really seems to be "pressed down" by the top of the frame. Thanks so much for pointing that out to me. That sort of thing is very helpful in separating the wheat from the chaff. I really appreciate your input; thanks for commenting cheers, frank -- "Sharpness is a bourgeois concept." -Henri Cartier-Bresson -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
