On May 5, 2009, at 15:23, frank theriault wrote:
The lack of response to my PESO of earlier today tells me that there's
not a great deal of excitement about it - which is fine by me.
However I've been looking at it, thinking it's pretty messy around the
edges, so I've cropped it to clean things up a bit. Maybe it improves
it, maybe not, but FWIW:
http://knarfdummyblog.blogspot.com/2009/05/shelter-redux.html
For comparison purposes, here's the original:
http://knarf-underground.blogspot.com/2009/05/in-shelter.html
I dunno, Frank. It just seems kind of muddy and messy and flat.
Nothing jumps out at me - and the lines of the bus shelter frame as
well as the lines on the glass cutting across the middle make for
something which, for me, doesn't have much of a focus.
So - it doesn't draw me in.
Typically, when a picture doesn't appeal to me I tend to just not say
anything (trying to be polite?) but... since it looks like you'd
really appreciate input, I thought I'd tell you how it "works" (or
not) for me.
-Charles
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