The typo is funny, but the rest of the copy is just horrible. "10 megapixels in a metal exterior" ?? And of course a dangling participle, which isn't always that bad, but this one dangles waaaay out there. Awful writing.

Paul
On May 13, 2009, at 8:04 PM, John Celio wrote:

http://failblog.org/2009/05/13/digital-camera-description-fail/

Right now, a copywriter somewhere is being flogged.

John

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