> > a slideshow i've made using photos some of which you may have > already seen. i'm very interested in opinions, especially of > those who haven't seen many of these yet > > http://www.flickr.com/photos/tamoneki/sets/72157610320673025/show/ > > what do you think, does it work, is the tempo ok, moodswings > tolerable, etc... > thanks for viewing, > best, > luka
I think it's terrific. I don't agree with the people who said it lacked a theme - to me the theme is clearly this group of people, where they live and the relationships between them and the place. I do think some of the photos could be removed to strengthen the them. For instance, the dogs are a but discordant, but on the whole I find the whole project fascinating and I love your composition and use of colour. You need to talk to a magazine editor about the work, get him/her to publish the photos and work with the editor on the best way of making a coherent essay. Bob -- PDML Pentax-Discuss Mail List [email protected] http://pdml.net/mailman/listinfo/pdml_pdml.net to UNSUBSCRIBE from the PDML, please visit the link directly above and follow the directions.
