Thanks, Frank. It is etude - like in "an attempt, an exercise", etc...

So I reckon, it gotta be something improvable...

:-).

Boris


frank theriault wrote:
On Thu, Oct 29, 2009 at 2:43 PM, Boris Liberman <[email protected]> wrote:
Hi!

http://pentax-ways.blogspot.com/2009/10/peso-2009-034.html

Please be brutal and honest.

I generally like it, but the bright tree trunks in the background
somehow seem at odds with the fact that they're out of focus.  They
become "too much" a part of the composition and detract from the
foreground, to my eye.

Still, it's a good photo - I just think it could be better.

cheers,
frank




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